Afterwind Rap Tournament

Seems VAGlNEER was serious about leaving AW... *Sigh* Guess this means I win by forfeit.

ps @Stomach Y U no post for rap battle yet?

Yayyyyy VAGlNEER bok nao lets battles

I'm giving win to Barrymore as a DQ win cos SU didn't post a verse.

I'm gonna go ahead and post my verse and if VAGlNEER doesn't reply within 2 days I must DQ him. (Yes I will PM him this.)





1st line = I insults his label
2nd line = I said his style isn't sharp (witty sharp not knife sharp for some of u)
3rd line = I said he doesn't go hard
4th line = I Insulted his word making skills
5th line = For those who don't know the abbreviation "IME" means In My Experiance, so I basically said he isn't my tier
6th line = Kinda a word twister as the phrase "trippin" means to lie and also means to trip or fall, so I somewhat gave u the picture that he's on the floor lieing.

I'm afraid since VAGlNEER did not post his verse within the required time limit he is DQ'd.

Now matches are

@Barrymore
vs
@LilDGoinIn

&

@VAGlNEER
vs
@Stomach Ulcers


Due date for all verses is in 4 days, if failure to submit a verse your opponent will win. (If both people don't submit I'll put it as a tie or double DQ.) I will send a PM to all in this tournament.

Just wrote this. I read The Road recently if anyones seen/read that, it's pretty heavily inspired but more about what happened rather than what is happening.

P.s. I've got a funnier rap if people don't like this.

I'm sorry you have to see the world this way
I'm sorry you didn't see it back in my day
We once had a chance to change our fate
But the horse had bolted by the time we'd closed the gate
First Bangladesh and the Polynesian States
They were the first sign that it was too late
100 million people lost their homes, so they
took to the road, came in droves, til the Indians said "no"
"We can't take anymore we're closing our border"
Hoping that would maintain law and order
But the refugees didn't get the refuge they seeked
so Muslim turned on Hindu and Hindu on Sikh
They're all gone now, sunk beneath the sea
It may well be just you and me

The Scientists told us all it was too late to stop it
But we never really cared until the crops all rotted
Food prices tripled in a year, you should have seen us then
We turned into beasts when once we were men
Turned out that money and power were worth jack shit
You can't eat gold, drink gold, so what good is it?
We once had people we called kings
They had many houses and wore ornate rings
They died first as people took all they could steal
Their heads on spikes humanities fate was sealed
It wasn't just the rich, to the heavens people appealed
They were told "Thou shalt not kill" and "thou shalt not steel"
How about thall shalt not starve to death?
Horde all the food and fuck the rest
Cos our religions crumbled when put to the test
When you can't feed your kids who cares which god is best?

You think it's bad up here, you should see the equator
Oh what's the Equator? Well son we now call it the Razor
Cos it's the line of desert that divides our world
We're northerners son, you'll never see a southern girl
You'll never see New York at New Years
Chill out after work with mates and a few beers
Hike through the Alps and watch the sunrise
See your very own son first open his eyes
Canute was right you can't fight the tide
Cities flooded we fled to the countryside
But even the hills were consumed, nowhere left to hide
Sucked under by the currents they burned as they died.

So that's how we came to be here son
We took on nature and nature won
Our fields were turned to ash under the sun
Constant cash crops destroyed our soil
We drove our cars as the world was spoiled
The rocks melted and the seas all boiled
Well in a million years our bones will be their oil
I think of all the people that I have lost
I wonder if our lifestyles were worth the lost
We ignored the signs as our world warmed
We pay for it now but we were warned

*Removed cliche ending*

Tear u to pieces, make it explicit,
What no porn? I know you'll miss it,
Now yo callin everybody nerds? LIKE OH U FUCKIN ISN'T!
I would say Touche' but u never hit it,
Above the bar but u never hit it,
Rapper's beat but u can't spit it,

Neva runnin like a meet,
Call dat shit obsolete,
So do me a favor and get the fuck off dis beat,
I'm a front page issue while u kick it Back Street,


Freestyled, but thats cuz I forgot.^

You see one of the major parts of writing is that you probably want to try to make sense. You don't seem to have done that at all in that last rap LilD

Well. I've won.

My vote goes to Barry on this one : D

Barrymore, although your last rap was certainly an interesting poem to read, it seems more like something one would enter in a poem contest than what one would use in a battle. I think your first post was more applicable to this contest, as it's essentially a long intelligent boast about yourself, while the last one was a story.

LilD, I can't understand your post. I agree with Counterpart on that one.

Sooooo... considering Barrymore didn't actually battle, and I can't seem to grasp LilD's rap, my votes go to VAGINEER and Stomach Ulcers's nonexistent raps.

लिखा द्वारा Counterpart, 31.07.2012 at 01:46

You see one of the major parts of writing is that you probably want to try to make sense. You don't seem to have done that at all in that last rap LilD

I said it was freestyle... And you probably don't understand cos not from Dallas.

If you wanna go freestyle and use shortened forms, you need to use voice, man, otherwise it'll look ... not as good as you'd want it to.

Congrats barry to your win of this kinda awesome tournament

लिखा द्वारा LEGION, 28.02.2012 at 01:50

Roses are red
Watches are gold
Get on your knees
and do what your told

My vote is for Norakai

Medal pls

लिखा द्वारा Barrymore, 10.08.2012 at 13:38

Medal pls

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